Blog Entry #3 - Argument
Introduction
Hi readers, today I want to talk about how the author of my book, Marc Aronson develops an argument in his writing. To date, I have read up to page 201, and I think I have a pretty clear idea of how he likes to structure and defend his arguments at this point. I touched a bit on argumentative style in my last blog post, but I'll go more in-depth into his viewpoint development in this post.
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For the most part, Aronson is very clear with what his big arguments and viewpoints are. At the start of the book, he lays out exactly how he thinks the idea of race is defined. His four "pillars" of race are laid out early on: "Physical differences matter", "These differences in our bodies cannot change", "That is because they are inherited", and "Each group has a distinct level of brain power and moral refinement, thus they are naturally and unchangeably ranked."(2,3) By saying his points so early on in the book, Aronson can go into depth later on about these topics, backing them up without introducing them at separate times. The reader will already have at least a general basis on which to relate the information they gather from later chapters. This first section of the book provides a strong structure for all that follows.
This book is very factually and historically driven, so it would make sense that he says his points at the start as a kind of table of contents. While I do not fully agree with all four of his "pillars", I do appreciate the confidence with which he states them. It could have been very easy to write out some very general, very basic descriptions of races and call it a day, but instead, Aronson puts forth ideas that he clearly believes in. Some of his views, especially the last one about races being "unchangeably ranked" are almost jarring in how clearly stated they are.
With topics like this, It can be really hard to nail down strict definitions, because you don't want to offend people. Aronson, instead of tip-toeing around saying what he feels, decides to cut all confusion out of the picture. Personally, I really appreciate this approach, because it shows what he's thinking so we know what to expect from him in the rest of the book.
The Arguments
As for the arguments themselves, I've discussed them in a previous post, but I'll go over them now as well. The way Aronson crafts his arguments is through storytelling and historical knowledge. Using events from history related to his argument, he has all the information he needs to make his point. It really seems to be an odd way to go about making an argument in a non-fiction book. I believe what allows him to take this uncommon approach is the baseline of viewpoints he expresses early in the book.
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What do you think about this style of writing? Do you think that this is the most effective way to make an argument or not? Also, if you aren't reading the same book that I am, I'd be interested in hearing how the authors of your books make their arguments.
Thanks for reading!
Hello Torm, I enjoyed reading your blog post! It is definitely a bold move to have controversial statements like that however I think that clear cut arguments are important in a book like this. It seems like the author is very clear about what he is arguing and what he isn't. The author of my book similarly is very clear with her points but instead of outlining her "pillars" exclusively, she weaves them into her argument. I am not sure which strategy is more effective and I'm sure both have their advantages. One big difference between our books however seems to be in evidence. My author has about 60 pages packed full of citations at the end of the book while it seems like your saying that your author is mostly using personal knowledge and stories. Do you think your author could benefit from incorporating more modern evidence and facts?
ReplyDeleteHi Tom! I also appreciate the way in which Aronson laid out the four pillars of race in his introduction, and then built off of them for the rest of the book. I felt as if I could better make connections and understand him because I had a general idea of where he was going. I also agree that he didn't shy away from making very clear cut statements, which helped everything to make more sense. Obviously this topic has many layers, and I think he acknowledged that without letting it confuse his overall argument. Personally, I really like how he structured his argument and the style of his writing, and I think that it helped me to understand the topic better!
ReplyDeleteThomas, do you think Aronson actually believes these pillars, or is he just identifying how race has been defined over time?
ReplyDeleteAlso, considering how he shows some of the historical ideas about race, do you think that part of his purpose/argument is to show the flaws in these patterns of thinking about race?
Hi Thomas! I am also reading "Race," and I am really enjoying it. I find his style of writing (mainly historical/factual) to be very effective. I have to agree with you that the way he develops his argument by laying out the facts and pushing the reader in 'the right direction' so to speak, he has a unique way of writing. What do you think about his anecdotes at the beginning of the chapters? Do you find they add or detract from his argument?
ReplyDeleteHi Tom,
ReplyDeleteI also found that the pillars of race outlined in the beginning have served as an excellent point of reference throughout the book. Since Race doesn't focus on how race is defined, I found it really helpful to have a clear definition to work with while I read. I also appreciated that he worked examples of each pillar into certain time periods without having to re-introduce them, like you said. Seeing when each factor of modern-day race came into play really helped me understand the timeline as a whole.
Hi Tom!
ReplyDeleteThis is my first time reading one of your blog posts and I really enjoyed it. It sounds like what your author is putting out there can be controversial. His four pillars are very out there but it seems like he keeps using historical facts to back them up. I read some of the other comments to get a better understanding and it seems like he uses more examples from the past rather than more so the present to back up his arguments. Is this true? I'm reading Just Mercy and my author develops his arguments from past cases he had. He uses multiple examples of each to back up the arguments he makes. It can be similar to what you're explaining here expect it's more story like rather than just facts being spit out. I really enjoyed reading about how your author represents his arguments.